It's Wednesday!! Here's my newest 100 word story, and the prompt is a great one!
The prompt: The attack was over in seconds
My story:
It hit hard,
completely blindsiding her. A tidal wave brought on by the smallest pebble
dropped into the pool of desire.
The attack was over in
seconds, but once she started she found it impossible to stop. Weeks of
progress lost in only a few moments.
A groan escaped her
lips as she thought of the repercussions.
She lay on her back,
one hand draped over her eyes, the other clenching her stomach. The empty bag
sat crumpled beside her, a reminder of her lack of self-control.
“Curse you M&M’s!”
she whispered, even as she wished for just one more.
I hope you liked it! Don't forget to check out what the others wrote:
Jaclyn Weist: jaclynweist.blogspot.com
Kaye P. Clark: kayepclarkwriter.blogspot.com
Jenna Eatough http://mistglenmoon.net/blog/
K.R. Wilburn http://www.krwilburnbooks.com/
Jenifer Lee: www.myfam-i-lee.blogspot.com/
Love that metaphor! Very creative!
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