Wednesday, April 23, 2014

WonHundred Word Wednesday: Fries with that?

Here it is, Wednesday!! If you're wondering "What is WonHundred Word Wednesday?" We are a writing group that responds to a writing prompt each week (on Wednesday), the kicker is we only get 100 words to write a story. Ever tried it? It's a little crazy :) But its super fun to write and to read everyone's stories. These writers are so creative!
Anyway, here is my response for this week's prompt: Would you like fries with that?

When I saw him, I knew he was the one. He was gorgeous, perfect in every way, and vastly superior to those around him. I waited anxiously, imagining when we would at last meet. A voice pierced through my fantasy, asking what I had dreamed of hearing. I responded automatically, anticipating every sinful moment that would soon be mine, trying to ignore the consequences that would undoubtedly follow.

The voice spoke again.

“What?” I asked, irritated at the interruption.

“Would you like fries with that?”

“No!” I exclaimed, horrified at the thought. “Just the burger.” The beautiful, wonderful, mouthwatering, burger.

I had fun with this one, let me know what you thought in the comments. And make sure to check out the other blogs, they are fantastic!
Happy reading!

Wendy Knight, Author:
Kelly Martin, Author:
Alison Woods (Peering Into. . .):
Jessica Winn, The Distracted Writer:


  1. Hahah! LOVE the twist at the end! It made me giggle :)

  2. And now I want a burger. :) Good job!

  3. I think I might have to go get a burger and fries now. Great descriptions and fun little surprise there.

  4. Awesome! The burger was perfect (and it won't talk back, either).

  5. You don't come between a girl and her burger. I liked it. :)

  6. Sometimes I feel this way about good food too. :D

  7. I just popped over here to say HI! I like how your blog turned out. It looks great.